Dear Colleagues,

FYI attached is the feedback we have received from Jan Aart Scholte, our independent Advisor. Jan raises some very useful points for our further deliberations.

I would suggest we count this as "public comment input #1" and add this to our upcoming public comment analysis tool.

Best
Mathieu

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Sujet :	Re: [CCWG-Advisors] CCWG near final draft proposal
Date :	Sun, 3 May 2015 14:14:43 +0000
De :	Jan Aart Scholte <jan.scholte@globalstudies.gu.se>
Pour :	Adam Peake <adam.peake@icann.org>, CCWG-Advisors <ccwg-advisors@icann.org>

Dear All

Attached the promised more substantive comments for the CCWG on the draft proposal of 1 May 2015. Really impressive that things have got this far already, though as ever there can be suggestions for going further.

Greetings

Jan

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