Dear Becky,Thank you very much for taking the time for addressing Kavouss’ concern.Kavouss,I hope this helps you and others in the group.Best regards,LeónEl 02/09/2015, a las 9:49, Burr, Becky <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz> escribió:<Redline - Proposed Changes to CURRENT Mission Commitment & Core Values.pdf><Redline - Proposed Changes to CURRENT Mission Commitment & Core Values.docx>_______________________________________________In response to Kavouss’ formatting request, I have attached a redline showing the proposed changes from the existing Bylaws provisions. Please note that the texts are not organized in the way, so to make the comparison meaningful, I had to re-order the text to insure that the proper language was being compared. I apologize if that is unsatisfactory Kavouss, it’s the best I can offer.
J. Beckwith BurrNeustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 / becky.burr@neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz
From: Kavouss Arasteh <kavouss.arasteh@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, September 1, 2015 at 4:38 PM
To: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>
Cc: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] Final version - chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
Dear All,I have not checked the doc. because it is not checkable.Standard procedure is that the initial texts are placed in one column and the amendemnets in the second column BUT WITH REVISION MARKS and NOT AS CLEAN TEXTSORRY IT IS NOT WORKABLE TO CHECK WORD BY WORD AND LIONE BY LINEREGARDSKavouss
2015-09-01 15:45 GMT+02:00 Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>:
Dear all,Please find attached the final version of the synopsis Becky prepared.The document can also be found on your second draft proposal wiki page at https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=53783460We will have a link to the chart added to the public comment period box - https://www.icann.org/public-comments/ccwg-accountability-draft-proposal-2015-05-04-en.ThanksBestAlice
From: "Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch>
Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2015 5:02 PM
To: "Becky.Burr@neustar.biz" <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz>, Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>, "accountability-cross-community@icann.org" <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: AW: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core Values
Dear Beck,many thanks for your prompt and responsive answer. I feel many will benefit from this added explanations.RegardsJorgeVon: Burr, Becky [mailto:Becky.Burr@neustar.biz]
Gesendet: Mittwoch, 26. August 2015 15:59
An: Cancio Jorge BAKOM <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch>; alice.jansen@icann.org; accountability-cross-community@icann.org
Betreff: Re: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core ValuesDear Jorge,I will attempt to insert an explanatory column this morning.BeckyJ. Beckwith BurrNeustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006From: "Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch" <Jorge.Cancio@bakom.admin.ch>
Date: Wednesday, August 26, 2015 at 1:43 AM
To: Becky Burr <becky.burr@neustar.biz>, "alice.jansen@icann.org" <alice.jansen@icann.org>, Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: AW: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core ValuesDear Becky,Thank you very much for this very useful comparison.I wonder whether a third column with an objective impact assessment of the changes would be available, in order to better understand what each and every change intends to achieve specifically and what impact this would have on current ICANN activities and operations.If this would to be done I would recommend that the explanation is inserted directly into the column and that we refrain from just inserting references to sections in the report as this makes the reading and understanding of the changes much more difficult.In addition to the foregoing, perhaps it would be useful to extend this comparison to any other specific Bylaw changes proposed in the Report, in order to benefit from a complete picture of what is being proposed at this level in one single document.Best regards,Jorge CancioVon:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org] Im Auftrag von Burr, Becky
Gesendet: Dienstag, 25. August 2015 22:31
An: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>; accountability-cross-community@icann.org
Betreff: [CCWG-ACCT] chart comparing current Mission & Core Values with 2nd Draft Proposal Mission, Commitments & Core ValuesI’ve put together a chart with the requested comparison. Hope it helps. Alice, I assume someone will post as appropriateThanks,BeckyJ. Beckwith BurrNeustar, Inc. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006From: Alice Jansen <alice.jansen@icann.org>
Date: Monday, August 24, 2015 at 5:04 PM
To: Accountability Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Call with advisorsDear all,This is to inform you that as part of your outreach and public comment process, a call will be held on Monday, 31 August - 13:00-14:00 UTC to collect CCWG-Accountability Advisors' input on the Second Draft Proposal.May we also take this opportunity to remind you that your third webinar is scheduled for tomorrow – Tuesday, 25 August – 18:00-20:00 UTC – see https://www.icann.org/news/announcement-2015-08-17-en for details.Webinar Q&As on your second draft proposal are compiled on a wiki page at: https://community.icann.org/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=54695403Thank you,Kind regardsAlice
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