A consolidated draft with changes from Becky, Malcolm and myself is attached. Given where we are in the process, I have included marginal comments explaining any change I made that was more than punctuation or a typo. I don't think any of the changes represent "new ideas" but there are a couple of places where the original idea was rather obscure so I attempted to clarify it.

Greg

On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 7:45 PM, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:

What new ideas are you referring to?

On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 7:45 PM, Malcolm Hutty <malcolm@linx.net> wrote:
Correcting typos is fine, but I believe the Chair announced that we are past the point of introducing new ideas that haven't been agreed by the working party.

> On 31 Jul 2015, at 00:20, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's changes. Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.