Greg — is it possible for you to merge your edits/comments into the consolidated draft that Becky and Malcolm just shared?

From: <accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com>
Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 7:20 PM
To: Malcolm Hutty <malcolm@linx.net>
Cc: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [CCWG-ACCT] IRP text following call with Malcolm

My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's changes.  Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.

Greg

On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM, Malcolm Hutty <malcolm@linx.net> wrote:
On 2015-07-30 22:07, Burr, Becky wrote:
Sending again

Thank you again Becky.

Best,

Malcolm.


J. Beckwith Burr

NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer

1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006

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 From: <Burr>, Becky Burr <becky.burr@neustar.biz>
 Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 4:20 PM
 To: Accountability Community
<accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
 Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] FW: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report
revised to reflect our work

These are the current docs

J. Beckwith Burr

NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer

1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006

Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 /
becky.burr@neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz


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