This draft won’t be discussed in Work Party 1 until later this week. We are sharing with CCWG since the entire group contributed to discussion of these items in Istanbul.
I started with the
v5 document we reviewed in Istanbul, and made
these edits:
- Added context and background on AoC termination, Stress Test 14, and citations — to make this easier for new reviewers to understand
- Noted that AoC sections 3,4,7, and 8 include commitments that should be imported into Core Values section of ICANN’s bylaws (Mathew Shears and Becky Burr)
- Re-arranged Fiona’s original doc so that actual AoC text is shown just above our proposed text.
- Added a column of notes to explain where we are differing from original AoC text.
- Re-phrased the review of effectiveness of GAC interaction, per several commenters.
- Adopted Kavouss’ suggestion to require implementation of prior reviews before next round of new gTLDs
- Adopted Avri’s suggested language for ATRT review item f
- Added Avri’s suggestion for annual reports
- Added comments from Sebastien, James Gannon, Alan Greenberg, and others.
Look forward to discussion via email or on our next WP1 call.
Best,
Steve
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Steve DelBianco
Executive Director
NetChoice
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