My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's changes.  Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.

Greg

On Thu, Jul 30, 2015 at 5:30 PM, Malcolm Hutty <malcolm@linx.net> wrote:
On 2015-07-30 22:07, Burr, Becky wrote:
Sending again

Thank you again Becky.

Best,

Malcolm.


J. Beckwith Burr

NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer

1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006

Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 /
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 From: <Burr>, Becky Burr <becky.burr@neustar.biz>
 Date: Thursday, July 30, 2015 at 4:20 PM
 To: Accountability Community
<accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
 Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] FW: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report
revised to reflect our work

These are the current docs

J. Beckwith Burr

NEUSTAR, INC. / Deputy General Counsel and Chief Privacy Officer

1775 Pennsylvania Avenue NW, Washington, DC 20006

Office: + 1.202.533.2932 Mobile: +1.202.352.6367 /
becky.burr@neustar.biz / www.neustar.biz


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