Correcting typos is fine, but I believe the Chair announced that we are past the point of introducing new ideas that haven't been agreed by the working party.

> On 31 Jul 2015, at 00:20, Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com> wrote:
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> My suggested changes are marked in track changes on top of Becky's changes.  Most were typos or wording changes to improve clarity.