Hi Alice

W/r/t this on page 21:

The CCWG-Accountability is yet to reach consensus on the proposed language that is intended to
address contract enforcement and regulation: [PLACEHOLDER: Without in any way limiting the
foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services that use the Internet's unique
identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide. ICANN shall have the ability to enforce
agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of community input on those
agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s
Mission on registries and registrars.]

Could we be clearer as follows: first putting the agreed text from proposal v2 and then the caveat given that we have no agreement on a variation on that text as of yet. Our approach so far has been to refer to or look back to existing agreed text.

Without in any way limiting the foregoing absolute prohibition, ICANN shall not regulate services that use the Internet's unique
identifiers, or the content that such services carry or provide. ICANN shall have the ability to enforce
agreements with contracted parties, subject to established means of community input on those
agreements and reasonable checks and balances on its ability to impose obligations exceeding ICANN’s
Mission on registries and registrars.

Note: The CCWG Accountability is continuing discussions on contract enforcement and regulation, in particular as relates to comments from proposal v2.

On 13/11/2015 13:40, Alice Jansen wrote:

Dear all,

As announced on your call #67, this is to kindly remind you that final edits on the attached draft Formal Update (circulated on 12 November) are needed by 17:00 UTC today.

As indicated on the call, no line edits will be taken into account. Co-Chairs are asking for content related comments.

Per the note below, any format, font and proofreading issues are being addressed by a professional writer.

Thank you,

Best regards

Alice

From: Bernard Turcotte <turcotte.bernard@gmail.com>
Date: Friday, November 13, 2015 12:04 AM
To: "accountability-cross-community@icann.org" <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: CCWG - Draft Update document for CCWG call

All,

As per Mathieu's email of earlier today please find the draft Proposal Update document which will be discussed at the next CCWG meeting.

The document is going to professional formatting as we speak - so any issues of layout, fonts etc. will be addressed by a specialist.

This document also represents a consideration of all the comments received with respect to the previous version - not that all of these were accepted, but a majority were taken on.

We apologize for the lateness of the document, but as you will notice we have put significant efforts into recasting this per the comments.

Bernard Turcotte

ICANN Staff Support for the CCWG

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