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Indeed. Agree 100%.

As one Government type put it to me in Dublin, off the record ...

"they SERIOUSLY expect that any substantive work is done in the public=20
sector over the Christmas period????"


On 11/12/2015 04:07 PM, Malcolm Hutty wrote:
> I agree with Phil's reasoning as to why any extension is required.
>
> However, given that the public comment period would span the holiday
> season, I would suggest that public comment not close until Friday 8th
> January.
>
> This will materially relieve any criticism that we have made it
> unreasonably difficult for comments to be assembled by choosing dates
> that co-incide with the holiday season, without causing any significant
> additional delay.
>
> Malcolm.
>
> On 12/11/2015 15:32, Phil Corwin wrote:
>> On one hand I am relieved to see this as I was planning to post an email
>> today urging the Co-Chairs to either postpone issuance of the Executive
>> Summary until there was actually a completed final Proposal to
>> summarize, or to relabel it so that it would be clear that it was not a
>> document reflecting final resolutions of key issues on which formal
>> comments could be based. You have taken the second course and chosen to
>> label it as =93Formal Update on our progress in and after the Dublin mee=
ting=94.
>>
>>
>>
>> On the other hand, this decision now makes clear that the length of the
>> public comment period is inadequate. In the CCWG=92s October 22^nd
>>   Statement
>> <https://www.icann.org/news/blog/cross-community-working-group-on-enhanc=
ing-icann-accountability-icann54-co-chairs-statement>
>> this appears:
>>
>> The current timeline proposes posting a high-level overview of
>> recommendations and a summary of changes from the 2nd Draft Proposal for
>> a 35-day public comment on 15 November 2015. Alongside the 35-day public
>> comment, the CCWG-Accountability will submit these resources to the
>> Chartering Organizations for initial feedback. The CCWG-Accountability
>> plans to issue a full detailed report, including annexes and in-depth
>> documentation, mid-way into the public comment period for roughly 20
>> days of consultation.
>>
>>
>>
>> A Formal Update cannot legitimately be the basis of either public
>> comment or informed feedback from the Chartering organizations. Thus it
>> is clear that there is really only a 21-day public comment period under
>> the current timetable, starting with the November 30 release of the 3^rd
>> draft Proposal, if the current target of December 21 is adhered to. This
>> is inadequate for a matter of this importance and complexity, and
>> considering the major differences between the Member and Designator mode=
ls..
>>
>>
>>
>> *Therefore I again urge the CCWG to extend the public comment period
>> deadline to at least December 30 to permit a 30-day comment period,
>> which should be the minimum requirement in this case.*
>>
>> * *
>>
>> Lastly, I do not think that the issuance of a Formal Update obviates the
>> need for an Executive Summary to accompany the 3^rd draft proposal. Such
>> a Summary could be extremely useful in assisting the community in
>> understanding the document, particularly by explaining how the key
>> remaining issues were resolved.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thank you for consideration of my views.
>>
>>
>>
>> *Philip S. Corwin, Founding Principal*
>>
>> *Virtualaw LLC*
>>
>> *1155 F Street, NW*
>>
>> *Suite 1050*
>>
>> *Washington, DC 20004*
>>
>> *202-559-8597/Direct*
>>
>> *202-559-8750/Fax*
>>
>> *202-255-6172/cell***
>>
>> * *
>>
>> *Twitter: @VlawDC*
>>
>>
>>
>> */"Luck is the residue of design" -- Branch Rickey/*
>>
>>
>>
>> *From:*accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org
>> [mailto:accountability-cross-community-bounces@icann.org] *On Behalf Of
>> *Mathieu Weill
>> *Sent:* Thursday, November 12, 2015 8:22 AM
>> *To:* accountability-cross-community@icann.org
>> *Subject:* [CCWG-ACCT] Status of summary document
>>
>>
>>
>> Dear Colleagues,
>>
>>
>>
>> The activity on the list has been very intense lately. As co-chairs we
>> would like to warmly thank all commenters on the recent documents. The
>> feedbacks were extremely helpful, whether on substance or format, and
>> our support team is working hard to take your feedback in account for
>> the updated version.
>>
>>
>>
>> You will remember that a lot of concerns were raised that what the CCWG
>> is working on is difficult to understand for those who are not following
>> the groups intense work. In response to that, we have discussed and
>> agreed we would publish a document explaining in plain language what we
>> are doing. We have factored this into the agreed plan.
>>
>>
>>
>> At the time, we had expected to having reached consensus on all
>> remaining questions. As this is not the case today, we suggest flagging
>> this accordingly and move forward with the publication of the document,
>> which we would call a *Formal Update on our progress in and after the
>> Dublin meeting*, rather than an executive summary.
>>
>>
>>
>> Many of you have correctly stated that the document we shared with you
>> is not an executive summary due to its length. It is rather a short
>> version of our report without offering information on the rationale for
>> decisions and the genesis of our recommendation. This level of detail
>> will be found in our report. We have, however, added a 2 page abstract
>> in addition to incorporating a plethora of your suggestions to make this
>> document accurate, more accessible and shorter.
>>
>>
>>
>> To be clear:
>>
>>
>>
>> The document that we are planning to issue on Nov 15 is designed to
>> update the community on the progress we have made during and after ICANN
>> 54. Its goal is to raise awareness of where we are, what our proposals
>> are, so that outreach can start and consideration of our final report
>> (announced for Nov 30th) can take place in a shorter time frame.
>>
>>
>>
>> While the content of the document would reflect the positions of our
>> group, closing outstanding issues is not a requirement before issuing
>> this formal update. Outstanding issues will be flagged as such. What is
>> needed is a high level summary, as well as some level of detail
>> regarding the topics we made progress on in Dublin : decision making,
>> sole designator model, budget, individual director removal, and human
>> rights.
>>
>>
>>
>> Our public comment period will then focus on soliciting feedback on
>> these changes in order to avoid the duplication of efforts for
>> commenters on areas of our report that already enjoyed broad support.
>>
>>
>>
>> With the full report, we will offer the opportunity to publish minority
>> statements.
>>
>>
>>
>> We do hope that you find these clarifications and suggestions helpful.
>> We will circulate the next version of the Update within the next 12
>> hours, and the discussion of the document will be on the agenda of our
>> call on Friday 13 November, at 6.00 UTC.
>>
>>
>>
>> Many thanks again to all of you for your continued commitment.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thomas, Leon and Mathieu
>>
>> Co-chairs
>>
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