Editorial comment:

The first sentence of the Background section could reasonably end after the word "Government". The subsequent comma and comment detract from the clarity of the scope statement.

Eric Brunner-Williams
Eugene, Oregon

On 1/22/15 5:07 AM, Alice Jansen wrote:

Dear all,

On behalf of the CCWG-Accountability Co-Chairs, please find attached a draft statement (Frankfurt – 19-20 January) for your consideration.

Please flag any edits and/or comments you may have by today – Thursday, 22 January - 17:00 UTC.

Thank you

Best regards

Alice
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