Thanks Grace.  

Dear CCWG, 
Attached please find some proposed edits for consideration.

Best, 

Sam

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org>
Date: Friday, May 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM
To: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: [CCWG-ACCT] Edits due in 3h: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

Hi all, 
Just a reminder than edits, comments are due in approximately 3h. Thank you to those who sent edits earlier today.  If you must send late edits, please send a note to the Chairs with staff in copy to give us notice that your comments will be delayed. Best to stick to the deadline, but we know everyone is working hard to get this draft report ready, and we’d rather get your comments than not at all.
Have a good weekend, 
Grace

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org>
Date: Friday, May 1, 2015 at 11:19 AM
To: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: Re: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

Dear all, 

We sent the V10 draft report earlier today (in UTC) but have been notified that, in some cases, the files are too large to download from the email attachments. As a reminder, the draft (redline and clean versions) are posted on the Wiki: https://community.icann.org/display/acctcrosscomm/Draft+Report. 

Looking forward to receiving your comments and edits,
Grace

From: Grace Abuhamad <grace.abuhamad@icann.org>
Date: Thursday, April 30, 2015 at 9:22 PM
To: Accountability Cross Community <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: V10 DRAFT for your review by 2 May at 01:00 UTC

Dear all, 

Here attached is the CCWG-Accountability Draft Report V10. I have attached a redline and a clean version (in Word and PDF). 

Version 10 incorporates the following: 
  • Changes from the CCWG-Accountability call on Thursday 30 April at 05:00 UTC
  • Edits from legal counsel (Sidley and Adler)
  • Approval from the CWG-Stewardship Chairs/Client Committee regarding incorporation of CWG-Stewardship recommendations
  • Edits from Chairs and Rapporteurs 
Please send your edits, comments, etc to the mailing list bySaturday 2 May 01:00 UTC (24h from now). Staff will incorporate the edits over the weekend so as to release a final version for Public Comment on Monday, 4 May. If possible, edits are appreciate in track changes in the clean version so that they are clearly marked and visible. There will be professional formatting and copyediting done before publication, so we suggest that your time my be best spent by focusing on the substance-related edits. 

Also, please remember to submit your feedback regarding the XPlane graphics by Saturday as well. Adam will send a reminder re: XPlane. 

Almost there!
— Grace