This is a pretty good report. 

This working group may want to consider grabbing some of its wording around the explanation for how the technical functions currently work and the multistakeholder process. It is very clear, cleanly worded and less focussed on process - meaning it is more understandable to people outside ICANN.

The frameworks it identifies for the NTIA to use to assess the working group proposals - especially this accountability one - are also very useful and may be worth considering following or referencing by this group both because it is good practice and because it will simplify things for the NTIA.

Kieren