Hi Holly, Greg,

Thank you for pointing these out, we will flag them to the proofreader.

As mentioned in the timeline and next steps email sent by León on 19 November (attached), the CCWG-Accountability does have a professional proofreader/editor going through the document to ensure that any minor details are fixed and addressed as the group finalizes the proposal moving forward.

Thanks,

Hillary

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From: <acct-staff-bounces@icann.org> on behalf of "Gregory, Holly" <holly.gregory@sidley.com>
Date: Monday, December 7, 2015 at 2:27 PM
To: Greg Shatan <gregshatanipc@gmail.com>
Cc: ACCT-Staff <acct-staff@icann.org>, "Rosemary E. Fei" <rfei@adlercolvin.com>, CCWG-Accountability <accountability-cross-community@icann.org>
Subject: Re: [Acct-Staff] [CCWG-ACCT] Two Questions on Annex 9

In a document this size and with so many moving pieces there are bound to be some glitches. I think these are minor in nature, but it does underscore the value in using this time to have someone go through and do a thorough proof read to identify anything that needs to be fixed for the next draft.