here was Malcolm's doc I have taken the liberty of PDFing it as well. ---------- Forwarded message ---------- From: Malcolm Hutty <malcolm@linx.net> Date: 31 July 2015 at 06:15 Subject: Re: [WP2] IRP text from Initial Draft Report revised to reflect our work To: "Burr, Becky" <Becky.Burr@neustar.biz>, "wp2@icann.org" <wp2@icann.org> On 30/07/2015 17:49, Burr, Becky wrote:

With huge apologies for late delivery, I’ve attached a draft of the report text revised to reflect our decisions. I am willing to put the draft bylaws language in the report as an appendix, but I don’t think its fully cooked right now.

Dear Becky, Thank you for this, which crossed with my private message to you. Please find attached a marked up version. My changes are mainly references to items that we agreed to include in the draft bylaws language, but are not mentioned in your text. I also propose one additional paragraph of introduction, rebutting the suggestion that this moves us from a multistakeholder body to create an International Court with its own body of international law. Regarding the "cookedness" of the draft bylaws language, we did go through it line-by-line and make our respective compromises and formed a consensus. Do you really propose to re-open those issues? Or do you just mean reformatting it for redlining? Malcolm.

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