Dear Ariel, Nathalie, Staff First, Many Thanks for this, there are a lot of re-wording and suggested edits which required a lot of effort and patience to go through. A challenge is that to see the suggested edits, one has to hover over a lot of highlighted (including crossed out or underlined words, comment icons) to see what are the suggested edits are which makes it challenging to review. Is there a draft "clean" version with the edits made? It would make the review faster and see whether the guide conveys the topic of At-Large Structures and Individuals in a clear, straightforward manner. Kind Regards, Dev Anand On Mon, Sep 28, 2015 at 1:16 PM, Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> wrote:

Hello All,

Following today’s Outreach & Engagement Subcommittee call, please be so kind to submit your comments on the Redline version of the Beginner’s Guide in its wiki workspace, using the comment function by Monday 05 October 2015: https://community.icann.org/x/zSvRAg.

If you wish to provide more substantive comments, you may also send them via emails directly to staff@atlarge.icann.org.

As a disclaimer, we are mainly doing some *cosmetic* changes to the Guide, as a lot of its content (text, graphic, etc.) will be repurposed for the new At-Large website and can be updated more easily there. We will solicit further input from the community with regard to beginners-friendly content when the Beta site is up and running.

Thank you very much for your time and help in this!

Best Regards, Ariel

From: Ariel Liang <ariel.liang@icann.org> Date: Sunday, September 27, 2015 at 3:40 PM To: <alac-sc-outreach@atlarge-lists.icann.org> Cc: "devtee@gmail.com" <devtee@gmail.com>, ICANN At-Large Staff <staff@atlarge.icann.org>, Nathalie Peregrine <nathalie.peregrine@icann.org> Subject: Input welcome - Beginner's Guide to At-Large Structures

Dear All,

As you are probably aware, the Beginner’s Guide to At-Large Structures is going through an updating process. Staff took the lead and suggested a number of updates, ranging from links and graphics to text and the Guide's overall structure. The redline version is posted here: https://community.icann.org/x/zSvRAg.

We would welcome input from the community with regard to those suggested changes. This Guide will also be discussed during tomorrow’s Outreach & Engagement Subcommittee teleconference.

Thank you in advance for your input and help!

Best Regards, Ariel

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