I found the document to be very comprehensive and to the point. I recommend to keep it the way it is. 

My thanks to the group that put this together.

-ed

On Sat, Apr 30, 2016 at 12:56 AM Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote:
Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up
editing (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).

Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.

Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment
prior to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.

Alan
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