The first draft of the ALAC comments is posted at https://community.icann.org/x/koU0Aw. A copy is also attached to this e-mail. It needs to be read along with the overall proposal (https://www.icann.org/en/system/files/files/cwg-accountability-draft-proposal-with-annexes-04may15-en.pdf).

The final version must be submitted on Wednesday, 03 June by 23:59 UTC.

Although the comment covers a lot of areas, I believe that it faithfully reflects (on the whole) what has been contributed on our many teleconferences on the subject).

Please post comments and suggestions here using line numbers to identify target text.

Note that at the start I was inserting the explicit questions asked by the report but found they added little value to the comments already inserted. I will remove these Blue questions in the next version.

Alan




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