And I’ve also had a run through - bit of editing to ensure clarity etc

Holly

On Feb 5, 2023, at 5:32 PM, Cheryl Langdon-Orr <langdonorr@gmail.com> wrote:

I've now done my run through  some inline suggests some in the comments 1 just re formatting for @Chantelle Doerksen 
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On Sun, 5 Feb 2023 at 02:03, Marita Moll via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:

I am done with making changes. Too bad we didn't get anyone in on the UA issues.

Marita

On 2023-02-04 12:49 a.m., Maureen Hilyard wrote:
😊

On Fri, Feb 3, 2023 at 6:52 PM Holly Raiche via ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org> wrote:
Ladies

Thank you both for the editing.

I’d love it if you could finalize comments within the next several hours - or within 23 hours, to give me time to read through the document and pick up and final edits.

I think the organization largely works- the budget stuff and then text on the Operating Initiatives - under relevant headings so that it’s clear what is being talked about.  But then probably both of you have done enough editing in your lives so I don’t need to say anything.  I just want to do a final clean up tomorrow afternoon my time (21  hours from now)

Thanks again to you both

Holly
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