Hi all
I've said it before but not with such specificity. My recommendations:
1. Incorporate the key ideas in the "Proposal" section into the Executive Summary
2. Merge the "Background" and the "importance of Face to Face" meetings into a couple of paragraphs
3. Shorten the bullet pointed items in the "MultiYear Planning section" to key ideas only, present them after a short introduction
4. End with the conclusion and next steps, as is :)
3 pages MAX. (plus your graphic and annexes). At the moment we are competing with the bylaws for quantity.
Maureen