At 30/04/2016 10:43 AM, Seun Ojedeji wrote:

Thanks for the share, I recall that it was suggested to link this to the fact that this is also in sync with ICANN multi-year planning initiative; was that the intent for the last sentence in the executive summary? It may be good to make it more explicit than that.

The last sentence in the Executive Summary is a(very) vague reference to this. The specific on is in the last paragraph of section 5 which points to the exact section in the budget document that addresses multi-year projects.


Can we run this through Rinalia to get comment in regards to the volume because I agree as well that 7 pages may be quite a lot. While recognising the volume of pages, I think if we must further shorten this, then item 2 may go completely, while items 3 and 4 can be collapsed into one as they are both trying to provide justification (Infact we may remove 3 and just leave item 4)

Rinalia has been a part of this process. While I have no doubt there could be some reductions, we have pretty much run out of time.

Alan


That said, I have no strong opposition about the current status as it looks great and the board should be fine with it [1] but can be made better if indeed volume becomes a concern.

Regards
1. Afterall the transition proposals are much more voluminous than this ;-)
Sent from my LG G4
Kindly excuse brevity and typos
On 30 Apr 2016 5:56 a.m., "Alan Greenberg" <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca > wrote:
Attached please fine the final proposal, subject to final clean-up editing (and inclusion of the missing URL on the last page).

Please forward any critical errors to me and Heidi.

Note that this paper must be submitted to the Budget Public Comment prior to 23:59 UTC on Saturday, 30 April.

Alan

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