Dear Maureen and all,

I would like to thank the ALS Mobilization Working Party for their work and for the quality of their final report.
I have a concern with the proposal for Bylaws change to replace "The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users » by ""The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") oversees the At-Large Community which is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users. »

The ALAC doesn't oversee the At-Large Community. 2/3 of its members are appointed by this community (RALOs),  I propose to modify this bylaws change proposal by the following: "The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") is the voice of the At-Large Community which is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users. » or "The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") represents the interests of the At-Large Community which is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users. » 

The term « oversees » is not appropriate. It is as if you say the GNSO council oversees the NCSG or NCUC or NPOC or the BC or the IPC or the Registry …. communities. Any term that have the meaning of control or domination of the At-Large Community by ALAC  wouldn’t be acceptable. Otherwise, I can live with any other word.

Best