Thank you Alan for sharing the document. I spotted three minor typos which I highlighted in red.

Thanks again

Hadia

From: Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca>
Sent: Monday, November 21, 2022 2:03 AM
To: Chantelle Doerksen <chantelle.doerksen@icann.org>; ALAC <alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org>; Hadia Abdelsalam Mokhtar EL miniawi <Hadia@tra.gov.eg>
Subject: ALAC Comment on the EPDP Registration Data Draft Policy

Attached is the formal reply form completed in accordance with the discussions during recent CPWG meetings.

There are comments on:

Section 4: Effective Date

Section 10: Disclosure requests

Background

Thick Whois Transition Policy

Alan