I see a lot wrong with it - and I see a lot that I disagree with in Jonathan’s first draft. I have been tied up teaching, but finally have a bit of time to put my thoughts down - and I decidedly do NOT think the IPC/BC is a great model. For a very different view, read the NCSG response- attached. So PLEASE - give people at least a bit more time to look at what Jonathan’s response - and mine.