ICANN Legal has come back with a number of issues related to the Bylaws, including this one. Can we please put this issue on hold until the next version is issued? Alan At 2020-11-22 06:17 AM, Maureen Hilyard wrote:

Dear Tijani

Thank for first bringing this matter to our attention. It is an issue that Alan raised as one that should be dealt with before the report is accepted.

The two alternatives that I had originally been given as replacements for "oversee" were "advocate for" and "represent" ...

But I see that your recommendations also include "represents the interests of" and "is the voice of".

I will ask staff create a poll for the ALAC to pose the alternatives to be considered for their selection. Thank you again for your suggestions.

Regards Maureen

On Sun, 22 Nov 2020, 1:05 am Tijani BEN JEMAA, <<mailto:tijani.benjemaa@topnet.tn>tijani.benjemaa@topnet.tn> wrote: Dear Maureen and all,

I would like to thank the ALS Mobilization Working Party for their work and for the quality of their final report. I have a concern with the proposal for Bylaws change to replace "The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users » by ""The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") oversees the At-Large Community which is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users. »

The ALAC doesn't oversee the At-Large Community. 2/3 of its members are appointed by this community (RALOs), I propose to modify this bylaws change proposal by the following: "The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") is the voice of the At-Large Community which is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users. » or "The At-Large Advisory Committee ("At-Large Advisory Committee" or "ALAC") represents the interests of the At-Large Community which is the primary organizational home within ICANN for individual Internet users. »

The term « oversees » is not appropriate. It is as if you say the GNSO council oversees the NCSG or NCUC or NPOC or the BC or the IPC or the Registry …<. communities. Any term that have the meaning of control or domination of the At-Large Community by ALAC wouldn’t be acceptable. Otherwise, I can live with any other word. Best

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