Thank you Izumi very much for the feedback, attached is  the updated version!
 
have  productive time everyone,
 Veronica

-----Original Message-----
From: "Izumi AIZU" <iza@anr.org>
To: "Veronica Cretu" <VeronicaC@diplomacy.edu>
Cc: alac@atlarge-lists.icann.org
Date: Wed, 13 Feb 2008 18:41:07 +0900
Subject: Re: [At-Large] ALAC Draft statement on Organizational Development

Thank you Veronica for your hard work.

I felt that the ending part is bit short, and came up with the
following para to be added a the very end. Please feel free to include,
modify (or not).

We believe that these Organizational Development activities have
enhanced the efficiency and effectiveness of the new body of
ALAC/RALO/ALS and offer a sound base for further development in view
of the ALAC Review now launched. We think ALAC Review and its result
will contribute further enhancement of AtLarge in more sustainable and
effective direction that will bring better ICANN as a whole.

best,

izumi

2008/2/13, Veronica Cretu <VeronicaC@diplomacy.edu>:
>
>
> Dear all!
>  Here is the draft statement on ALAC/AtLarge Organizational Development!
>
> Any  comments and suggestions are welcome!
>
> Regards to all,
> Veronica
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