The edits look fine to me, however I gather Olivier has some concern regarding the write up of SSR Rec 27:

"Recommendation 27 review is too complacent."

as well as a view that the commentary for that recommendation does not reflect the ALAC statement. I'm happy to revise, but am unsure how to address his concerns without additional information.

On Dec 19, 2013, at 8:25 AM, Larisa B. Gurnick <larisa.gurnick@icann.org> wrote:

David,
Please review the proposed edits to Appendix C – SSR Review Implementation and provide staff with your final edits by 16 UTC on Friday, 20 December.

Thank you,

Larisa B. Gurnick
Consultant/Senior Director, Organizational Reviews
Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)
larisa.gurnick@icann.org
310 383-8995

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