Fiona, I did consider this carefully, and I addressed it when I sent out my updates on the 13th.

The AoC references cross-community deliberations in regard to policy development. We have heard a number of times, that things are working quite well in regard to the ASO and the ccNSO, so it would appear that the GNSO is the only area that we really need to be focusing energy at this point, and the only one where we have been presented with evidence that we have a problem that warrants an ATRT recommendation.

Let's discuss it on the call if you feel there is still a need, so that I can better understand what needs to change. Alan At 17/12/2013 12:26 PM, Fiona Alexander wrote:

Thank you Larissa.

One question with respect to new recommendation 9. The topic is cross community deliberations but the recommendations focus exclusively on the GNSO and the GNSO pdp process. On a call a few weeks this was raised and I thought adjustments were to be made to broaden this out?

Fiona ________________________________________ From: atrt2-bounces@icann.org [atrt2-bounces@icann.org] On Behalf Of Larisa B. Gurnick [larisa.gurnick@icann.org] Sent: Tuesday, December 17, 2013 11:29 AM To: ATRT2 (atrt2@icann.org) Subject: [atrt2] ATRT2 Final Report - Draft #1

Dear Review Team Members, Attached is the Final Report ­ Draft #1 for your review. It incorporates all changes submitted to date. Staff would appreciate your review to ensure that your edits were accurately reflected in the report.

Several aspects of the report require further work:

· Executive Summary language to be updated ­ ATRT2

· Summary of public comment for several recommendations to be added ­ ATRT2

· Synchronization of final recommendations between Executive Summary and body of the report - staff

· Formatting clean up ­ Table of Contents update, links from Executive Summary to the body of the report, etc. - staff

Staff proposes that the Review Team discuss and resolve the following points during the upcoming call:

1. Inclusion of Draft Recommendations, along with Final Recommendations, in the body of the report

2. Boilerplate text if there's nothing to report for Public Comment section. Paul’s suggestion: "There were no specific public comments on this issue, and/or any comments received were in agreement with the Report's findings."

3. Posting of Final Report ­ with or without translations? In considering the timing, please note that ICANN is closed for the holidays 24 December through 1 Jan and some staff may not be available during this time.

Best regards,

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