Hi Lawrence,

I have gone through the article and am finding it difficult to “edit” the article. There is an inherent lack of a single idea/takeaway.
I believe the article needs to be rewritten with a clear takeaway for the reader and should offer some new insights or information that is unique for the readers of the BC newsletter.

My recommendation would be to skip this article and we can work with Imran to write another article for the next newsletter.

Hope this helps.

Regards,

Vivek Goyal
COO
LdotR.Red
vivekg@LdotR.Red
+91-7738130687



On 29-Aug-2022, at 12:39 PM, Lawrence O. Olawale-Roberts <lawrence@microboss.org> wrote:

Dear Vivek,
Kindly find same attached here.
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Hi Lawrence,
 
Kindly share the article from Imran that needs to be edited by the comms committee.
 
Thanks
 
Vivek Goyal
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On 26-Aug-2022, at 3:37 PM, Lawrence O. Olawale-Roberts <lawrence@microboss.org> wrote:
 
Dear All,
 
Attached is a draft copy of the BC’s Newsletter for ICANN 75. A slot is reserved for Imran’s article (if the Communications Committee can have it edited in time for publication) while am working on another with regards the breath of BC’s membership via Trade Associations. A few edits are expected for this draft and are being worked on by staff an the sections around the Board and NomCom.
 
All edits and submissions would have to come in by Monday as the designer is on holiday from the 2nd day in September.
 
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