Thanks Ben, the edits are noted and will be effected in the Newsletter.
Lawrence
On 08/06/2021 12:33 pm, Ben Wallis (CELA) wrote:
Apologies for the bother. I’ve tracked the two edits and noted the two hyperlinks into the Word version of the article that I originally submitted (attached). They are all on page 3 of the pdf version, in paragraphs 2, 4, 9 and 11.
Ben
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Subject: Re: [Ext] Re: [EXTERNAL] ICANN 71 Newsletter
Hi Ben and Lawrence!
I also looked for the updates on the attachement Ben mentioned in his email. I could not find them either. Happy to update Cheryl once I know exactly what the updates are.
Thank you!
Best,Brenda
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Subject: [Ext] Re: [EXTERNAL] ICANN 71 Newsletter
Dear Ben,
I wasn't able to locate the edits you proposed but if Brenda can, I would solicit she kindly shares them with the designer. It would help to send them in another format or by email.
Sorry for the bother.
Lawrence.
On 07/06/2021 11:23 am, Ben Wallis (CELA) wrote:
Thanks Lawrence.
I’ve requested four edits on page 3 to my article on NIS2
- Two edits to the text I originally provided (one correction and one improvement, if space allows)
- Two hyperlinks to enable access to further info and to draw traffic to the BC website
Hopefully the edits are visible and understandable in the attached pdf. But do let me know today or tomorrow if it would help to provide them in another format / explain them by email. (I am on leave Weds-Fri this week).
Thanks
Ben
From: Lawrence O. Olawale-Roberts <lawrence@microboss.org>
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Subject: [EXTERNAL] ICANN 71 Newsletter
Dear ExComm and Comms Committee,
The initial draft for our ICANN 71 Newsletter is herein attached.
We just got it in from the designer and would now have to proof read for correctness and necessary edits. The goal is to have this finalized by the 8th of June in time for the BC Outreach next week.
Kindly draw my attention and Brenda's to any area you identify that requires edits on or by Monday the 7th of June.
Warm regards,
LOR
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