We circulated Elisa Cooper's initial draft on 26-Aug and discussed on our member call on 29-Aug.
Andy Abrams (Google) quickly suggested "a minimum 60-day combined sunrise/notice period as opposed to a minimum 30-day notice period and minimum 30-day sunrise period."
Liz (FairWinds), Laura (Yahoo), and Marie (AIM) agreed with Andy's suggestion. As did Elisa, who circulated a new draft on 3-Sep.