Dear Steve and all, 

 

We agree with the BC comments and appreciate the work done by Steve and other BC members on these issues. 

We support these efforts and understand the need for implementation improvements to RPMs to mitigate costs and risk to companies and consumers and make RPMs more effective.

We are only attaching for your consideration some small suggested edits to the introduction. The idea behind these suggestions is to use a constructive and future oriented language approach. 

Please feel free to just ignore our suggestions if they do not reflect the way you/BC want/s to express or if not relevant.

 

Thanks a lot,

Gabi & Celia

eInstituto


Gabriela Szlak 
Directora Iniciativas RED/ODR y eGobernanza

eInstituto 

25 de mayo 611 Piso 3ş  - C1002ABM 
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2013/1/14 <martinsutton@hsbc.com>
Let me try that with the attachment! (sorry)



Martin C SUTTON
Group Risk
Manager, Group Fraud Risk and Intelligence | HSBC HOLDINGS PLC HGHQ
Group Security & Fraud Risk
8 Canada Square,Canary Wharf,London,E14 5HQ,United Kingdom
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From: Martin C SUTTON/HGHQ/HSBC@HSBC
To: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org>
Cc: bc - GNSO list <bc-gnso@icann.org>, owner-bc-gnso@icann.org
Date: 14/01/2013 10:19
Subject: Re: [bc-gnso] Updated draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman Solution
Sent by: owner-bc-gnso@icann.org





Steve,

Great work, thank you.


Given the sensitivities around the term 'blocking' I've suggested amendments to one of the paragraphs, which I hope is helpful.


Kind regards,


Martin


Martin C SUTTON
Group Risk

Manager, Group Fraud Risk and Intelligence | HSBC HOLDINGS PLC HGHQ
Group Security & Fraud Risk
8 Canada Square,Canary Wharf,London,E14 5HQ,United Kingdom
________________________________________________________________

Phone +44 (0)20 7991 8074 / 7991 8074
Mobile +44 (0) 7774556680
Email martinsutton@hsbc.com



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From: Steve DelBianco <sdelbianco@netchoice.org>
To: bc - GNSO list <bc-gnso@icann.org>
Date: 14/01/2013 02:30
Subject: [bc-gnso] Updated draft for approval on 14-Jan: BC comment on Strawman Solution
Sent by: owner-bc-gnso@icann.org






The attached update is for discussion and final approval during our 14-Jan member call.  


I've updated the original draft per suggestions from Ron Andruff, John Berard, Elisa Cooper, and Sara Deutsch. A redline is also attached to show those changes from the 2-Jan draft.


The BC will submit these comments on 15-Jan.  We will also be able to submit Reply comments thru 5-Feb.



From:
Steve DelBianco <
sdelbianco@netchoice.org>
Date:
Wednesday, January 2, 2013 5:44 PM
To:
bc - GNSO list <
bc-gnso@icann.org>
Subject:
DRAFT for review: BC comment on Strawman Solution


BC members:


In Toronto , the BC/IPC/ISPC requested improved Rights Protection Measures (RPMs).  That prompted ICANN executive management to host follow-up meetings with multiple stakeholders.   As a result, ICANN posted a "strawman solution" for public comment (
link).    Public comments are due by 16-Jan-2013.

Attached is a draft BC comment on the Strawman solution, based on prior BC positions and discussions, email exchanges with BC members, and initial review by the ex comm.


Per the BC charter, this draft is posted for 14 days of review and comment.  As soon as possible, please REPLY ALL with your suggested edits to these comments.   If any BC member objects to the BC filing the attached draft comment , please REPLY ALL and indicate your objection and reason.  


We plan to finalize and submit these comments on 16-Jan-2013.


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Steve DelBianco

BC vice chair for policy coordination

[attachment "BC Comment on Strawman Solution [v2].docx" deleted by Martin C SUTTON/HGHQ/HSBC] [attachment "Redline.docx" deleted by Martin C SUTTON/HGHQ/HSBC]




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