We discussed this on yesterday's member call.  Anjali Hansen volunteered (thank-you, Anjali), and we want to cast a broader net for help in drafting these comments. 

The second Accountability sand Transparency Review Team (ATRT2) was convened as part of the Affirmation of Commitments.  (ATRT2 page) 

The ATRT2 just published its draft review/recommendations (here), including these recommendation:

• establish clear metrics and benchmarks against which improvements in accountability and transparency can be measured;

• communicate clearly and consistently about its accountability and transparency mechanisms and performance; and

• improve and prioritize its AoC Review processes.

Initial comments are due 22-Nov so we want draft comments circulated to BC members before 8-Nov.

The BC offered several suggestions to the ATRT2 when they began in Jun-2013  (link)

Who else can help Anjali with review and drafting?