The BC has have held 3 conference calls on this topic (see minutes and transcripts on the BC Wiki).  Several BC members provided input, including text from Ron Andruff, Marilyn Cade, and Andrew Mack.  

Comment period closes 4-Jun.   That allows our regular 14-day review and approval period.  So, please REPLY ALL with your suggested edits and comments regarding this draft, before 29-May-2013.