Marilyn, I do not really have line item edit to suggest. The content of the document is fine. I do however suggest restructuring the document a bit. The first page should follow form of more an executive summary of the BC similar to what we would see in the corporate world. Beginning the document with FAQ of sorts is kind of cart before the horse. I recommend the following: 1. Convert section 1, (first 3 questions); Mission Statement; & How members Contribute section in to the beginning of the document as a BC Summary. I would also add 1 or two statements about how we fit within the CSG/GNSO/ICANN structure. 2. 2nd section becomes the BC member comments about the BC 3. Consolidate remaining questions in to a FAQ and apply to the end of the document. 4. Prior to the the FAQ is the consolidated section on how and where to apply and including the fee structure. Just my two cents.... Thanks, B Berry Cobb Infinity Portals LLC berrycobb@infinityportals.com http://www.infinityportals.com 866.921.8891