excellent, Lawrence, and many thanks. I do apologize to all of you for asking you to work on this over your week-end. 

I especially apologize for interfering with your Sunday time with family. 


Yes, Lawrence... 2018. Gracious!  And, yes, the visa issue is important to reference. I will work on this one last time in an hour, 

so if anyone has further suggestions, do let me know. 


M



From: Lawrence OlaWale-Roberts <icann@microboss.org>
Sent: Monday, December 4, 2017 3:14 AM
To: Marilyn Cade
Cc: BC Outreach; Jimson Olufuye; bc-excomm@icann.org
Subject: Re: [Bc-outreach] Fw: updated draft for feedback... msc/gabi/omar/tola
 
Thanks Marylin for the excellent job you have done on this document and to
Gabi, Omar and Tola for your edits.

Feeling that this is a good opportunity to also bring to the fore issues
bothering around visa assistance to travelers I have inserted a text that
can be edited into the base of No.4.

Alongside some minor edits I also presume the first paragraph of No. 9
should read AGM 2018. Do pardon me if I am wrong.

Thanks all for the detailed submission. Marylin if you will I would also
be lending my voice to the submission on the fellowship process.

Thanks,

Lawrence.

On Sun, December 3, 2017 11:08 pm, Marilyn Cade wrote:
>

>
> Dear colleagues on the Outreach committee and also the Excomm... I have
> had a chance to have a call with Omar and take into account Gabi, Tola
> comments. Omar and I discussed that we indeed should not focus on the
> Fellowship
> program but more broadly, so I made an effort to do that.
>
> So far, Omar, Gabi, Tola and I also think that we should have a separate
> working effort on improvements to the Fellowship Program that we can do in
> January, and submit to the fuller BC and then to ICANN.
>
>
> Thus, this new edit is more focused, and just references "more to come"
> comments specific to the BC.
>
> Comments are very welcomed, and I tried to make this "preliminary", so
> Susan/Steve, we might even want to say that these are preliminary
> comments.
>
> Many thanks to all of you who have commented, including Barbara and Steve
> and Jimson from the ExeComm and to the Outreach Committee.
>
> I will be online tomorrow around 8 am and will try to finalize any
> comments that come in by noon, so that Susan/Steve can then make our
> submission.
>
> Marilyn
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