Thanks for putting together the flyer!
I am also with Stephanie re: starting with Ruggies might be off-putting. We could start instead with the sentence "The session will discuss how ICANN can serve the public interest consistent
with human rights and what this means in practice", transforming it into a question (How can ICANN ...?)
I would also indicate the London and LA meetings with the corresponding number: ICANN 50 and ICANN 51, rather with the cities. 

In any case, never mind, really minor issues.
Thanks again!
Stefania




On Feb 1, 2015, at 1:33 PM, Marilia Maciel <mariliamaciel@gmail.com> wrote:

Thanks for caughting this typo Steph. I do not have strong feelings about the order of paragraphs. But I think it is very important that we have a final version of the flyer to approach SO/ACs and Fadi tomorrow. Could we close it today?
Best wishes and nice Sunday to all.
Marília




On Fri, Jan 30, 2015 at 12:23 PM, Stephanie Perrin <stephanie.perrin@mail.utoronto.ca> wrote:
you need an "on" in the third para after discussion, and my earlier comments still apply....not a good idea to start with the ruggies....
sorry to have missed the call, I have now signed up to the list (sorry I had thought I was on it)
On 2015-01-30 8:20, Niels ten Oever wrote:
Dear all,

Please find attached the final version of the flyer for ICANN & Human
Rights meeting at ICANN52.

Best,

Niels



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