Hi Mallory,
Yes, we did.
Here are the final versions:-
Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Universal Acceptance Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and Registrar Systems:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20%20-31-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)%20/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20on%20Universal%20Acceptance%20Roadmap%20for%20Domain%20Name%20Registry%20and%20Registrar%20Systems%20-31-10-2022.pdf
Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-30-08-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/Final%20CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Pilot%20Holistic%20Review%20Draft%20Terms%20of%20Reference-10-11-2022.pdf
Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Proposed Amendments to the SLA for the IANA Numbering Services:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-13-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Proposed%20Amendments%20to%20the%20SLA%20for%20the%20IANA%20Numbering%20Services-18-11-2022.pdf
Human Rights Gap Analysis for ICANN’s Draft IANA and PTI FY24 Operating Plan and Budgets:- https://itp.cdn.icann.org/public-comment/proceeding/Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-15-09-2022/submissions/Cross-Community%20Working%20Party%20on%20ICANN%20and%20Human%20Rights%20(CCWP-HR)/CCWP-HR%20HRGA%20for%20Draft%20IANA%20and%20PTI%20FY24%20Operating%20Plan%20and%20Budgets-17-11-2022.pdf
I will be sending an email shortly with a doodle poll for us to
discuss more potential submissions for the future.
Best Regards,
Ephraim Percy Kenyanito
Hi Ephraim,
These are both great. They are short and to the point.
Did they get submitted as comments already?
-Mallory
On 10/24/22 4:07 PM, Ephraim Percy Kenyanito via cc-humanrights wrote:
Dear Colleagues,
I had volunteered during our last NCSG call to draft the first draft Human Rights Gap Analysis for two public comments, I have been lucky to be able to work on the drafts with two CCWP-HR members please find two drafts here:
Universal Acceptance Roadmap for Domain Name Registry and Registrar Systems – 31 Oct- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jX53V0I2XKuGnhgCHLAvoy9eHg8lQuks4U6oBQhJKZY/edit
Pilot Holistic Review Draft Terms of Reference – 10 Nov- https://docs.google.com/document/d/10CK9s2r1WldKAOzZJvk35lkdQE5t8fa-JExnlJXUM4Y/edit
We welcome your feedback.
Please feel free to add any comments etc and I will be happy to share a second version ASAP.
--Best Regards,
Public Policy Specialist/ Regulatory Affairs Specialist/ Project Manager-
Ephraim Percy Kenyanito
International Trade, Technology, Media & Telecommunications Laws
Website: https://ekenyanito.com/PGP Fingerprint: B0FA394AF73DEB7AA1FDC7360CFED26DE6BA8DC1Twitter: @ekenyanito
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