Dear all I think I missed the Monday cutoff point. But just wanted to add my congratulations to Monica, and Niels et al for this fine piece of work. A lot has been deleted I see but I agree that the narrative has improved as a result: the additional efforts in accuracy and nuances with wording and terms really lift it up a level. Looking forward to seeing the final, fully copy-edited (though pretty good so far, just a couple of tenses/conjugations left to deal with) report and also to the next steps of distribution and "sign-on" by the wider ICANN community. I hope that BA is going, or has gone well. best wishes Marianne F On 05/06/2015 21:10, Niels ten Oever wrote:

Hi all,

Thank you very much for you comments. We integrated them as well as we could. We will have a last editing session over the weekend and then we will make the final decisions on Monday before the report goes to the editor and designer on Tuesday.

If you have any final comments it would be great if you could make them before Monday 12:00 (noon) UTC.

Thanks in advance,

Niels

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