Hi,

Many thanks to those involved in this draft, which covers all of the aspects I think.

My only comment is whether we could make the submission a little more easy to read and understand for people, particularly those who do not have English as their first language. My prompt for this was needing to look up 'adagium' , but also some of the sentences are quite long and bring in several things at once, meaning you need to hold a list in your mind whilst reading. If others agree, I wonder if we could get some support from a willing marketing/communications ccTLD person to assist?

Kind regards,

Lesley

Lesley Cowley, OBE