星期二, 四月 23, 2019, 5:39 上午 于 Bart Boswinkel <bart.boswinkel@icann.org>写道：
Dear Hiro,
Thank you very much for your comments!
I have updated Giovanni's version to include your suggestions. The updated version is included.
Kind regards,
Bart
On 23/04/2019, 05:41, "hotta@jprs.co.jp on behalf of HiroHOTTA" <hotta@jprs.co.jp> wrote:
Dear Bart, all,
Here goes my fourth comment.
(4) In section 4.2.1, the notation "(IDN) ccTLD" is used twice.
This notation may be ambiguous. How about changing it to
something like "(ASCII/IDN) ccTLD" or "ccTLD either in ASCII or
IDN"?
Hiro
On Tue, 23 Apr 2019 11:48:03 +0900
HiroHOTTA <hotta@jprs.co.jp> wrote:
> Dear Bart, all,
>
> I agree with Giovanni's amendment.
>
> On top of that, I have 3 comments.
>
> (1) first sentence of section 3 :
> Is "The Review Team should not to propose solutions ..." a correct
> English? Shouldn't it be "should not be to propose" or "should not
> propose"?
>
> (2) section 4 begins with section 4.2, not with 4.1
>
> (3) The terms 'WG' (Working Group) and 'Team' (as in PRT), both are
> used many times, confuse me. Do they refer to the same entity? Or
> 'WG' means the evolved form of PRT? If they are the same, how about
> changing the term 'WG' to 'PRT' or 'Team'? If they are different, I
> think the term 'WG' should be defined.
>
> Hiro
>
>
> On Fri, 19 Apr 2019 13:32:13 +0000
> Giovanni Seppia <Giovanni.Seppia@eurid.eu> wrote:
> > Hi Bart,
> >
> > Thanks for it.
> >
> > I just corrected few typos.
> >
> > I am fine with the rest.
> >
> > Best,
> >
> > Giovanni
> >
> >
> >
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> > From: Ccnso-council <ccnso-council-bounces@icann.org> On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel
> > Sent: Friday, 19 April 2019 11:13
> > To: ccnso-council@icann.org
> > Subject: [ccnso-council] Decision needed: Approval Terms of Reference
> >
> > Dear all,
> > As proposed on the 18 April 2019 Council call included for adoption the Terms of Reference for the Review Team, which is to conduct a Preliminary review of the IDN ccTLD recommended policy. Please note that after re-reading the text section 5.2 sub 1 has been slightly changed: it now reads Conduct a review of the relevant documentation referenced in Section 6 of these Terms of Reference, and other material considered relevant by the PRT.
> > The marked text has been added to ensure that the Review team can take all documentation it deems relevant into account.
> >
> > Please let us know your vote, in particular whether you object or abstain from taken a decision by 26 April 2019, 17.00 UTC.
> >
> > Thank you, and kind regards,
> > Bart Boswinkel
> >
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