Chris,

For consistency, in page one you should also delete the bullet point:

and move the final "and" to the previous item.

Patricio

Chris Disspain wrote:

All,

 

Attached is the updated draft in red line. Any further comments?

 

Cheers,

 

Chris Disspain

CEO - auDA

au Domain Administration Ltd

ceo@auda.org.au

www.auda.org.au

 

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