Dear all,

Please find included the comments the Council drafting team proposes the Council submits on the draft Terms of Reference for the Pilot Holistic Review ( https://www.icann.org/en/public-comment/proceeding/pilot-holistic-review-draft-terms-of-reference-30-08-2022) .

If you have any comments, questions or if you object please use the Council list, closing date is 28 October 2022, noon UTC.

Goal is to submit the comments on Friday, if supported by Council.

On behalf of the drafting team (Alejandra, Irina, Tatiana, Chris, Jordan, Pablo, Sean and Stephen)

Bart Boswinkel