Looks good, totally agree with the sentiment.
I put in a few minor edits for consideration.
Best wishes
Nick
From: Ccnso-council <ccnso-council-bounces@icann.org>
On Behalf Of Katrina Sataki
Sent: 18 July 2019 15:35
To: 'ccnso-council' <ccnso-council@icann.org>
Subject: [ccnso-council] Council comments on ccNSO review
Dear Councillors,
As agreed, we’re preparing a statement on the draft report on ccNSO2, i.e. our review:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1HB52_HV-MxzEPGQaACIos0Q31jTCWXqU/view
Please feel free to express yourselves by 23 July, 12 UTC.
Thank you!
Kind regards,
]{atrina