Hi,

I am a bit concerned about deviating too much from the text we presented to the ccNSO yesterday. Particularly, I do not recall us having discussed a 'competitive root within a privatised and competitive DNS' nor the danger of 'fracturing due to rushing to solutions'/'ICANN not having to provide absolute answers'.


Kind regards,
Lesley
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From: owner-ccnso-council@icann.org [owner-ccnso-council@icann.org] on behalf of Keith Davidson [keith@internetnz.net.nz]
Sent: 27 March 2014 03:29
To: Byron Holland; ccnso-council@icann.org
Subject: Re: [ccnso-council] Proposed statement

I like the structure and tone, but wonder if 6) could be worded a little
more assertively, and that some of the other asides might be worth
capturing also. I have worked a rough redraft attached, and wonder if
this might be smoothed for style and language and incorporated into the
statement.

Cheers

Keith

On 27/03/2014 1:30 p.m., Byron Holland wrote:
> Dear Councillors,
>
> Attached is a soft copy of the draft text I handed out yesterday.  It is
> my intention to make this statement at the open session later today.
>
> As noted yesterday, if you have any suggestions, please advise my noon
> today.
>
> All the best,
>
> Byron
>