Re: [ccnso-council] CcNSO Council Draft Statement ICANN SSR remit (closure public comment 31 August)

Dear Bart,

My primary remark is that recommendation 1 suggest ICANN to publish “a single, clear and consistent statement of its SSR remit and limited technical mission” while the draft that ICANN has published for comment (and that we are responding to) comes nowhere near fitting that description. The 5 1/2 page document has a 1 ½ page core that bears the title mentioned above, but that’s about the only reference in my opinion.

I suggest we include something along that line in our comment.

In addition, I have added a few minor comments in the original text, the the document attached

Cheers,

Roelof Meijer

From: owner-ccnso-council@icann.org [mailto:owner-ccnso-council@icann.org] On Behalf Of Bart Boswinkel
Sent: dinsdag 28 augustus 2012 15:34
To: ccNSO Council
Subject: Re: [ccnso-council] CcNSO Council Draft Statement ICANN SSR remit (closure public comment 31 August)

Dear all,
As discussed during the ccNSO Council call please provide your feed-back if any, by Thursday 30 August 17.00 UTC, to allow us to update the statement and submit it by Friday 31 August,
Kind regards,
Bart

On 8/28/12 10:08 AM, "Bart Boswinkel" <bart.boswinkel@icann.org> wrote:

Dear all,
Please find included the draft ccNSO Council feedback and input on the ICANN Draft Statement of its role in Security, Stability, and Resiliency of the Internet’s Unique Identifier Systems.
ICANN’s draft Statement was suggested by the SSRT (recommendation 1 and 3). The Security, Stability and Rsiliency review is part of ICANN’s commitments under the Affirmation of Commitments.

The drafting team has just finished its work. At today’s call the draft will be introduced and explained. Council members are requested to provide feed-back and input on the draft this week ( until Thursday 30 August). Becky and I will consolidate the comments, if any, so it can be submitted by Friday 31 August.

Please note that the Council initially intended this to be a ccNSO Statement. However due to time constraints consultation of the community is not feasible. As a result it is now submitted as a draft ccNSO Council Statement as foreseen in the guideline on ccNSO Statements and Position Papers (Section 3).
Kind regards,
Bart