Dear Marika,

Thank you for the follow-up

I did some editing to the letter as the following:

-for phase 1. Removed the capital letters; and suggest to replacement the second “initial” with “preliminary”

-for phase 5. Added "phase" to the following brackets. (as organized per phase 1.); put a comment for anther word (not sure of its grammer, English is not my mother tongue).

-for Phase 6. I converted one "and" to &, then put a second “and”

Attached is the document with my suggested edits.

Best wishes,

Nadira

On Mon, May 29, 2017 at 5:42 PM, Marika Konings <marika.konings@icann.org> wrote:

Dear All,

Please find attached for your review the updated letter to the charter organizations concerning the work plan and approach for dealing with the charter questions. This version includes the revisions discussed during last week’s meeting. If you have any further comments and/or edits, please share these by Friday 2 June. Following that, staff will go ahead and submit the letter on behalf of the CCWG leadership team to the chartering organizations.

Best regards,

Marika

Marika Konings

Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN)

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