I agree that the two bullet points do make conflicting statements. I agree with Becky's change to the first statement.

 

On Mon, Aug 26, 2019 at 10:08 AM Becky Burr <becky.burr@board.icann.org> wrote:
I am having a little trouble reconciling this:

  • The prime function of the APPRP will be to perform an annual review (starting at the end of year 2) of the ongoing operational process including an assessment of approved projects vs auction proceeds goals and an assessment of the success of funded projects (based on interim and final assessments provided to the APPRP).
with this:
  • For avoidance of doubt, the APPRP will focus on the overall operation of the Mechanism and will not evaluate the success of individual funded projects, although the APPRP may take into consideration such evaluations performed by the Mechanism.
In the first bullet, perhaps it would be clearer to say "an assessment of the overall success of the program"?

b

On Mon, Aug 26, 2019 at 3:49 PM Alan Greenberg <alan.greenberg@mcgill.ca> wrote:
Sorry this took so long.

The revision is attached.

Note that in the first bullet I have a bracketed sentence about the
SO/AC Chairs selecting if an SO/AC names more than 2 people. I think
we can safely omit this and require that an SO/AC not name more than 2.

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