I endorse Marika's argument for including the rationale in the first paragraph.

Sam L.

Thanks, Judith but deleting the last sentence from the first paragraph removes the rationale for the CCWG’s recommendation to not provide access to ICANN accountability mechanisms such as IRP. It may be important for readers to have this context to understand the CCWG’s recommendation? Also as a reminder, these two paragraphs do not immediately follow each other in the report.

 

Best regards,

 

Marika

 

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