Hello Johnathan,

Thanks for sharing this and I like that it does not try to define "open Internet" but was more focused on it as a concept in application to ICANN context. A few comments on the draft.

1. I wonder why root servers was specifically mentioned, wouldn't that already be covered in the DNS?

2. We mentioned "root servers"; literally there is logically one ICANN root but there are quite a number of other roots. I believe the intention is not to cover such non-icann root. I suggest tagging ICANN to that and perhaps also for DNS [1] as well

3. Bullet point 3 mention "...*whole* Internet community..." I think this suggests that the project must have a global scope but I wonder if that was intended? While I can live with that, I suggest removing "whole" as there might be certain projects that only have regional benefits which will be good to have.

Regards
1. Unless the term DNS is an ICANN registered trademark
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Kindly excuse brevity and typos

On Oct 18, 2017 8:10 AM, "Jonathan Robinson" <jrobinson@afilias.info> wrote:

Thanks Marika,

 

All, please be aware of the following definition of an “open and interoperable” internet as proposed by the informal drafting team.

 

Note the following:

 

1.      This is a draft, please consider whether or not it includes all the key concepts required for a preamble? If not, what else is missing?

2.      Please bear in mind that the preamble is a place for key concepts or overarching points rather than the fine detail of the bulk of the proposal.

 

 

Thank-you,

 

 

Jonathan

On behalf of the drafting team

 

 

From: Marika Konings [mailto:marika.konings@icann.org]
Sent: Tuesday, October 17, 2017 8:57 PM
To: ccwg-auctionproceeds@icann.org
Subject: [Ccwg-auctionproceeds] Proposed Agenda - CCWG Auction Proceeds Meeting on 19 October at 14.00 UTC

 

Dear All,

 

Please find below the proposed agenda for the next new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG meeting which has been scheduled for Thursday 19 October at 14.00 UTC. Call details have been distributed separately. If you did not receive the call details and/or require a dial-out, please contact gnso-secs@icann.org.

 

Best regards,

 

Marika

 

Proposed Agenda – new gTLD Auction Proceeds CCWG Meeting – 19 October 2017

 

  1. Roll Call
  2. Welcome
  3. Review of open and interoperable Internet description (to be distributed shortly)
  4. Review of examples (see https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zQ66hCxrboAJPKeuU6nHwzHQwmU6g_3kS0JUSSC_tSk/edit)
  5. Next steps in relation to charter question 7 ‘(‘Should ICANN oversee the solicitation and evaluation of proposals, or delegate to or coordinate with another entity, including, for example, a foundation created for this purpose?’)
  6. Planning for ICANN60
  7. Confirm next steps and next meetings (Thursday 02 November 2017 - 8:45– 10:15 Working Group F2F Meeting in Hall B Section B/C and 13:30 – 15:00 Working Group F2F Meeting in Hall B Section B/C)

 

 

Marika Konings

Vice President, Policy Development Support – GNSO, Internet Corporation for Assigned Names and Numbers (ICANN) 

Email: marika.konings@icann.org  

 

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Find out more about the GNSO by taking our interactive courses and visiting the GNSO Newcomer pages. 

 


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