Thanks John.  Helpful input.  I will incorporate some or all and send off a final version asap.  Jonathan

 

From: john@crediblecontext.com [mailto:john@crediblecontext.com]
Sent: 21 December 2012 17:24
To: Jonathan Robinson; council@gnso.icann.org
Subject: Some comments on the draft initial letter to the GAC

 

Jonathan,

 

It seems as if I may have too much time on my hands -- I have made some suggestions of tone (I think) to the draft you proposed.  Choose or ignore as you see fit.

 

Cheers,

 

John Berard

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